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please correct the sentences

Posted by majid72 · June 28, 2010 · 1 replies

Hello

Could someone please help me to correct the following sentences?
or provide better equivalents for the two ones?

- Sexuality and its manifestations constitute some of the most complex of human behavior. The expression of Sexuality and intimacy remains important throughout the life span.

Thanks a lot

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- Sexuality and its manifestations are some of the most complex of human behaviors.

- The expression of sexuality and intimacy remains important throughout life.