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majid72

Jun 28th, 2010 08:40 am

please correct the sentences

Hello

Could someone please help me to correct the following sentences?
or provide better equivalents for the two ones?

- Sexuality and its manifestations constitute some of the most complex of human behavior. The expression of Sexuality and intimacy remains important throughout the life span.

Thanks a lot

the hermit

Jul 2nd, 2010 02:13 am

Re: please correct the sentences

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- Sexuality and its manifestations are some of the most complex of human behaviors.

- The expression of sexuality and intimacy remains important throughout life.

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