
Mar 23rd, 2009, 01:48 am
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Sue | | Join Date: Oct 8th, 2006 Location: Milan
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Re: please check the text Whoops sorry - I've just seen a typing mistake - it's stocks and shares not sticks and shares - though in the current economic climate maybe there's not much difference
Instead of "the story goes", I'd expand the information you give: The boss, who had shares in the company, decide to sell them and to distribute the revenue ... etc
You don't need an introductory phrase - English tends to go straight to the point. |