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Dear members:

What's wrong with the sentence below?

Some members from a grammar forum stated that the conjunction AS is doing a dirty work, and that the statement is bad writing.


"As hundreds streamed in, more than 700 people filled every seat in the pews and more than 100 stood in the doors along the side."


I ask for your help in letting me to understand what it is really wrong.
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