 What are the grammar mistakes in my sentences?
I would like to write down some similar sentences below.
(1a) The works I am presenting by the various artists in my gallery are all very creative and splendid.
(1b) The works by the various artists I am presenting in my gallery are all very creative and splendid
(1c) The various artists' works I am presenting in my gallery are all very creative and splendid.
(2a) The best essays I am going to read to you by some students in a local school talk about the latest computer technology.
(2b) The best essays by some students in a local school I am going to read to you talk about the latest computer technology.
(2c) Some students' best essays I am going to read to you talk about the latest computer technology.
I am not sure which sentences sound natural, if any, in these groups. What are the grammar mistakes in them? Please help me. Thank you very much for your time and help. |