 Re: to which she simply indicates
No it's fine. I don't like indicates though - I'd replace it with answers unless the context justifies it :
Her colleagues find it amazing that she works so hard for no money, to which she simply answers that she loves basketball and wants to pass on her enthusiasm to younger players.
The use of the present simple is a bit odd here - but as I've said before, without knowing the extended context, it's impossible to evaluate language use accurately. It would make more sense with eg always : Her colleagues always find it... etc
Last edited by susan53 : Jun 12th, 2015 at 02:01 am.
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